Essay Outline

Essay Outline

Title: This year summer holiday

Despina Katsirouba

Attention Getter: I am tired of summer vacations with no friends

First comment: to be honest I always wished I would live the perfect vacation like the Hollywood movies

Second comment:  have tried it

Third comment: this summer will be the best

Thesis:… because

·         as always we won’t have the worries of school

·         my best friends are coming

·         we will go other places with my parents

1^st supporting paragraph:

Topic sentence: no school

First supporting sentence: no homework

Detail: more free time

Detail: no stress

Second supporting sentence: no boring days

Detail: not ‘wasting time’ with homework

Detail: sleep well

Detail: enjoy the ‘outside world’

Third supporting sentence: not be able to see friends

Detail: not be able to hang out with them

Detail: not have as much fun

Concluding sentence: to conclude not having school is both a good and a bad thing

Second supporting paragraph

Topic sentence: my best friends are coming to Greece

First supporting sentence: go to the beach

Detail: play with the waves

Detail: get darker skin

Detail: eat ice cream

Second supporting sentence: go shopping

Detail: see what’s in fashion

Detail: buy swimming suits and hats and other swimming supplies

Third supporting sentence: go to the movies

Detail: with my friends from Greece

Detail: eat pop corn

Detail: eat waffles

Concluding sentence: this summer my friends are coming to Greece and we are going to have so much fun

Third supporting paragraph

Topic sentence: go vacation

First supporting sentence: swim

Detail: explore the sea

Detail: compete with my dad and win

Detail: jump from the rocks

Second supporting sentence: have fun

Detail: go to restaurants and play with food

Detail: visit souvenirs shops and make my parents to  wear weird stuff

Third supporting sentence: visit museums

Detail: aquariums

Detail: nationals

Detail: madame tussauds

Concluding: after Greece we are going to visit other places that are new to us and explore them

Concluding Paragraph

Restate Thesis Statement: This summer will be the best of all years, although sort, because we will not have homework as always, my best friends are coming from Belgrade and I will go to island with my parents  and have fun with family friends

First Point Summarized: as every summer we are not going to school and we are not going to have homework or “loose” our time with homework or assignments but we are not going to see our friends

Detail: we are going to have more time, sleep well but will not going have as much fun and hang out at usce

Second Point Summarized: my best friends are coming from Belgrade and I am going to host them at my house and we are going every day to the beach, shopping and to the cinema

Detail: we are going to eat ice cream, buy swimming suits and go to the cinema with my friends from my old school

Third point Summarized:  I am going to go to islands in Greece with my parents and meet friends, go swimming, visit museums and have lots of fun

Detail: I am going to compete with my dad and of course win, visit Madame Tussauds and have fun by visiting souvenir shops and giving my parents weird things to try on

Clincher Sentence: This is going to be the best vacation ever, with friends