Tuesday, 5 June 2012

Sneaking into the Olympics- Final Copy



Chapter One
            Everybody took place around the wooden table; mom had prepared my dad’s favorite meal. Dad seemed blissful about that and I was pretty sure he could eat everything  from the table if we let him, but then there would not be enough for everyone. He worked really hard on the fields so to quench his thirst, mom put a small bowl with red wine with a little bit of water next to him.  The boiled meat sat in front of him. The smell was excellent and we could not wait; it seemed so juicy and the vegetables seemed so fresh, although dad brought them from the fields the day before.
After we said our prayers my brother and I pushed each and fought over the first piece. As always my brother won. I don’t know why but my mom and dad always watch us fighting for the first and best part of the meat and neither one of them stops us from fighting. They just smile! You might wonder why the first piece is so special. It is because in our family (basically only between me and my brother) the first piece means that you are stronger and that is why you get the better part.
            After our lunch, my brother and I asked our mom if we could go outside and play with our friends and for the first time she said ‘yes’. The previous times that we asked her the same question, she refused because the market, where we usually play, is really crowded. Once we were playing with the hoop my brother and I broke Iakintho’s pots and he told us not to play close to there again. He was really frustrated!
Today I suppose she let us go and have fun because it is a special day. Today are the Olympic Games and everybody is getting prepared which there would be no one around the market. The youthful athletes, that are not yet wedded, will be practicing for the big event. Their fathers are probably helping the other athletes who came from all over Greece to find the Stadium, show them where the list with the names are, so they can sign up and also lead them to the statue of Zeus, where they have to take an oath that they have been involved at the certain sport they are competing, for at least ten months. That means that they have to take a prayer and swear that they have been practicing and getting prepared for the competition so there is no confusion and they can trust it because we are very religious.
Chapter Two
            Let me now introduce myself because you are probably wondering who I am.  My name is Nike and I am twelve years old. I am kind of short with long light-colored hair and blue eyes which have the color of the sea. I have a brother named Aris who is older than me. He is fourteen years old and very tall. My mother’s name is Calliopi and my father’s name is Leonidas. They are all brunette and have green eyes except for me. I live with my family in Athens in a small house right in the centre of the city, close to the market. We have had this house for many generations back and I love living here because it reminds me of my grandparents who passed away three years ago. During the habitual day we all wear white tunics except for my mother who wears a light yellow one. She also has a thin cloth wrapped around her upper waist and I have a blue one wrapped around my lower waist. We all have strappy brown leather sandals. Since we all have olive skin, my mom never wears makeup, only during some special celebrations or events.
            Every day, my dad goes into the fields and helps to plant the crops and harvest them when it is time. He usually returns home after the sun sets but he is right in time for our dinner. When the Olympics are going on, he can choose three of the five days that he will stay either in the morning or in the afternoon and watch the Olympics.  My mom and I stay in the house and cook.  When we are not working, my mom meets her friends somewhere in public to sew. They go to different places depending on the day because sometimes the men of Athens use certain places to teach the boys how to write, read and play the flute or the lyre. These are places where my brother goes with his teacher too. I unfortunately can’t go to school because I am a girl. Us, girls are not allowed to do certain thing except if we have our dad’s or husband’s permission. However, the only thing we can do, without or with permission, is go to school. This is really not nice because we can’t then do the things that men can, such as work and it is important for me because I feel like their gender is overestimated and we are just slaves!

Chapter Three
Once we arrived at the market, as we thought, there were no grown-ups and kids there, except my brother, Cleopatra, Jason, Lilly, me and lots of others –all kids from our neighborhood. We started playing with a hoop that Cleo brought. We rolled it, we threw it to each other and in pairs, we held it on opposite sides, one person to each side, spin really quickly. When it was my brother’s turn with Jason, they fell and hit their backs; I ran at my brother and ask him if he was okay. He nodded. Cleopatra, my brother and I helped Jason stand up. They both looked fine but we couldn’t locate the hoop! We started running around the small area but we couldn’t find it anywhere. I looked under and on the trees; inside the bushes but I still couldn’t find it. Since we were not able to locate it, we decided to split into four groups of three and look all around the area.
            Cleopatra, my brother and I started walking. Suddenly we stopped because my brother had to fix his sandal-laces. While we waited for him, he started heard people shouting with excitement.  My brother slowly stood up and we all made a big step, while looking forward. We saw the stadium! It was full of men and young boys who were beginning to get ready to race. The view was extraordinary! We couldn’t recognize a lot of things because we were at the top of a small hill and the stadium was a little bit further away but still… it was marvelous! People were standing up from the marble bleachers and were cheering for the athletes.  
            We looked at each other with a big smile. It seemed as if we all had the same idea! We all wanted to sneak into the stadium and watch them at least for a while! It was THE craziest idea we ever had. But it could actually work, if we did it in secret and without anyone seeing us. The reason that we couldn’t go (except for my brother) is because girls and women are not permitted to go. It is probably because as my mom said when I asked her; the athletes don’t wear clothes. My brother can go, so can my dad and they always said that it was really nice to watch all those young men run and throw the disc. The most exciting part is when they announce the winners. From all those beautiful things that they said, we all desired to go there.       
Chapter Four
            The last rows of the benches were empty so we decided to climb from the back of the stadium, where none could see us, and just stay a little bit low, so they can’t notice us from our undersized height. Then we will wear our belts around our heads so our long hair wouldn’t be conspicuous. Then my brother will go from the entrance and he will sit in the front row so he can tell us when someone is looking our way. In my opinion it will perfectly work if we are really cautious.
            I stepped on my brother’s hands which he was holding very tight so he could make sure I wouldn’t fall and after Cleopatra. After both of us sat comfortably on the bleachers, my brother gave us a warning sign that he was heading for the entrance. Immediately Cleo and I put our belts around our heads and we saw my brother coming towards us. Something went really wrong with our plan. Unfortunately, our uncle met Aris at the entrance and they were both approaching our way. Suddenly my brother made a signal that we have planned to do when something went wrong and we had to leave. I looked speedily at Cleo and she looked at me. For our luck, my uncle saw a friend of him sitting in the first row and preferred to go sit with him instead of sitting with my brother. Thank God!
-          “It was so terrifying!” Cleopatra whispered to my brother.
-          “If he had made one more step, I tell you for sure, that we would leave immediately! I wouldn’t be able to handle the shame and pain I could have if he saw us” I responded taking part in the conversation
-          “I had no idea what I should have done to stop him… for a moment I thought I could…. Never mind!” he answered
-          “NO, tell us your thought” my friend and I said at the same time
-          “It was not nice and since nothing happened it doesn’t really matter if I tell you now… it was a really persecute thought”
-          “But we want to know…we won’t tell anyone” “If we tell it to someone it would be stupid because then they will start asking questions such as, what did YOU do there or, how do you know! It doesn’t make sense doesn’t it?” I quickly responded.
-          “Okay fine… I will unveil the ‘secret’ he hesitated for a while but then said with a jokie tone
We all started laghting
-          . Well… I thought of kicking his leg and from the pain he would fall down and then I would run away” “After I would sneak in a tree trunk away from Athens where no one would see and recognize me and my only friends would be the caterpillars!” he said while he blushed
            We all started laughing. My brother with his arrogant expression looked at us and quickly covered our mouths with his hands. We looked at him and saw that everybody in the front row was starring at us! As we realized after a while, our laughs were so ‘girly’ and they heard them! Ohhh, were in BIG trouble.
-          “Yhhhh” my brother said “Don’t worry, my friends are just making girly voices, that’s all!”
-          “Okay… whatever” said the guy in front of us.
Thank God my brother SAVED us!!
-          “I worship you brother!” I said “Thank you for helping us!”
After I finished my phrase he stared at me with an abundant face for us to close our mouth and don’t say a word till it is time to leave.
           
Chapter Five

            The athletes finally finished the sprint of 600 meters and they drank a sip of water. Then, a lofty man stood up and announced the winners. At first place it was Hercules. He was from Athens, a young man with eyes blue as the sea and golden hair as bright as the sun, that was put an olive tree branch around his neck, like a crown to step him, and stood up at the biggest rock that was placed next to a smaller one and a tiny one that were used as pedestals. The next one was Achilles, a tall guy with black hair and amazing greenish eyes who was from Sparta. Sparta has some of the most well trained athletes and they always returned to their town with pride but they have never won the first place. Last was a Corinthian young man who was a little bit ugly but since he runs really well, he deserved the thirtd place.
            After the game ended, a horde of men run at Hercules and cheered for him really loudly. He looked so proud of himself and it was really annoying. I also thought I felt a feeling of jealousy! Can you believe that? I mean he made us proud for getting the first place but he doesn’t have to look that proud! It makes the athletes that didn’t win think that they did nothing well but in fact the truth is that they tried and the result doesn’t matter!
            My brother jumped first off the bleachers first, which were not really high, and helped us climb down. Men walked out of the stadium, we were afraid of them seeing us so we started running. We headed for the market, where we were supposed to meet the rest of the kids, but there was no one there. We hadn’t realized how much time had passed since we left the market to go and look for the hoop!
-          “Where is everybody else?” Cleo asked
-          “I don’t know, maybe they returned after researching for the hoop and waited for us for a long time and then got bored and left” my brother said.
-           “I agree. Maybe it is time for us to also go home, it started to get dark” I responded “Good night Cleo, see you when the sun rises” I said.
      We waved at each other as Cleopatra walked the opposite direction
Chapter Six
            As we walked with my brother to our house I asked him if he was afraid of participating at the Olympic games next year. After he took a deep breath he said:
-          “I am not really afraid, but I am a little bit nervous. I just don’t want embarrass my family in front of the whole community! If I lose I will disappoint our parents and grandparents! I will not be that strong as the rest of our family is since all of our relatives took part at the Olympics. I want to feel that I am part of them and they will remember me for trying and my place olive branch that will be placed on my head and the crowd that will cheer for me”
-          “I am sure that you will be fine.  If you train hard for at least ten months we will be really proud for you and I am sure they will respect you as they respect the real winners. Even if you don’t win in my heart you will always be a winner! You helped two young girls to sneak into the Olympics and you would embarrass and ruin your life just to save ours’ by kicking our uncle! Which normal person would do that for us?”
-          “I know it was a violent action but I would risk my life for you!”
-          “Thank you very much and I appreciate that but I am worried about you. During the training you might get hurt  and I don’t want you to feel pain”
After we hugged each other we walked into the door of our house and said ‘hi’ to our mom. She kissed us on the forehead and told us to sit down and get ready for dinner.
-          “Dad will be here in a few minutes” mom said.
-          “Why did he go to the fields again? He went in the morning so why did he have to go again now?”
-          “He has to because all these five days of the Olympic game he can only stay in the house in the evening or in the morning and watch the games only for three days and he chose to watch games that he likes. He is interested to games like the disc!” my brother said since he is older than me and he knows what my dad does every year when the Olympic Games beggin.
-          “Mom, which game did dad participate when he was younger?” I asked with a big question mark drawn in my head?
-          “He participated in the disc and he won as you know the first place” my mom said really proud of my dad “I wonder who won the 600 meter sprint this year…”
-          “Hercules won! He was so proud of…..” I said but then when I realized what I was saying I covered my mouth with my hands.
My brother looked at me with his big eyes and was about to kill me. My mom facedat me quickly with a weird face
-          “How do YOU know? The result only come out when all the sports are done… in five days!” she slowly asked me.
I turned all red and looked at the floor… I felt so embarrassed and didn’t know what to say. She was still waiting for me to reply. After a few minutes she sat down on the chair next to me and told my brother to leave. When she was sure he wasn’t in the room she smiled at me and said:
-          I was also curious when I was young like you how it would be at the Olympic Games… so I did the same as you did today!! I sneaked into the Olympics!
I finally lifted my head up and looked at her after several  minutes. She still had a smile at her face and shook her head slowly while her memories of her childhood returned to her mind.
-          “You also did that, didn’t you?!”
-          “Yes mother” I said “I am so sorry but we were looking for the hoop and while we were searching for it we saw the stadium and then…”
-          “Don’t apologize, I told you that I did the same thing when I was like you… know I feel bad so STOP” she replied with a loud voice and she seemed so mad about herself
-          “I am sorry for making you mad but I also feel bad…” I said
She opened her arms wide and was ready for a big hug. I looked at her, curled into her hug and we both started crying from joy.
-          “You should have told me from the beginning, you know that you should tell me everything” “Now call your brother and don’t ever dare to mention anything to anyone or else we will both get in BIG trouble”
-          “Aris come down, father is here”
Dad just entered the house.
-          “What’s going on here?” dad asked
-          “Nothing much… we are… just… huh… I am helping mom to prepare dinner”  I answered quickly without much thinking
-          “Hmm… so what do we have for dinner? He said
He looked at me with a weird face knowing that something wasn’t right  but he didn’t want to ask because he was really hungry and he wanted to rest as soon as it was possible.
-          “We have boiled potatoes. I think you will like it” she answered hesitating a little bit and waited for my dad’s reaction
-          “That’s fine. I am just a little bit tired and I feel dirty from all the dust from the fields.
-          “So… what did you do when you went to the market? Did you have fun?” he asked
I looked at my brother and he also faced me and then I said:
-          “Nothing much… we just played with the hoop. That’s all” I said with a smile drawn on my face

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